Send me a google doc with comments enabled and I will bombard you with excellent comments. I don’t typically rewrite, because your voice is important. Instead, I show you what the reader experience is, so you can iterate and give your ideas the perfect form.

Not AI (LMAO)

AI can be decent as an editor giving you feedback. BUT for many writers, you likely end up with one of these typical failure modes.

1. If you are edgy, AI will push you again and again to take off your edge.
2. Your AI is usually sycophantic (glazing), and won’t give you the counter you need.
3. Your AI will push you to write like an AI—which is not what you want.
4. You’re AI is pettifogging. This makes its feedback almost useless.

Beyond that, it isn’t fun to work with, and you don’t work hard to impress it.

Send it to me!

Send me a draft of your writing and ask for comments. I’ll give it a first look to ensure I think I can add value and give you some high-level comments with a cost quote.

If your work requires multiple drafts, we can go through the cycle multiple times with clarity on the cost before each time.

I will not:

• rewrite your essay
• ghostwrite
• hold back punches and be encouraging if I don’t genuinely feel it.

Proof / examples

coming soon (asking for permissions and collecting pieces!)

You want in?